Storm — Bound To The General By Selina

Side-bar notes showing the General's true intentions for a mission.

If reading digitally, use a "click to reveal" mechanic for redacted text. Bound to the General by Selina Storm

In Bound to the General , the tension hinges on the power imbalance and the high stakes of a military or dystopian setting. A feature that would deepen the reader's immersion and the characters' connection is 🖋️ The Feature: The General’s Ledger Side-bar notes showing the General's true intentions for

A visual or narrative tally of what the protagonist "owes" the General. 🛡️ Why It Works A feature that would deepen the reader's immersion

This is an interactive, "living" document or hidden epistolary element within the story that tracks the General’s private observations versus his public commands.

Have the General say one thing, while the ledger shows he meant the opposite.

It creates a "ticking clock" feeling as the protagonist uncovers hidden agendas.